Script Draft Response: Sustainability at Emory

Screen Shot 2013-11-25 at 9.06.30 AMMolly, Soung, Justin, and Daniel have graciously agreed to go first and share the first draft of their script with us. Please read their great first draft, and then respond to the following questions in a short paragraph that you write in the comments section of this post. Also, be prepared to discuss your responses to the following questions as a class:


  • What’s the main claim/goal and what evidence/organization do they use to achieve that goal?
  • Where does the narration and visual imagery synch the best?
  • What transition(s) do you think works the best?
  • What unique ideas do the filmmakers bring to their topic?
  • How do the filmmakers incorporate contemporary ecological thought into their project (i.e. concepts from a text we’ve read this semester)?

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