Local Revision

Please read through the following sentence and be prepared to respond to the following: How would you revise each sentence? Why would you revise each sentence?

The main goal of this work illustrated a comparison between environmentalism and hoarding. It claimed that hoarding was more like the conservation of materials rather than a mental illness.

Cronon points out a key term “wilderness” in this essay, which by technical definition, is “The most intact, undisturbed wild natural areas left on our planet.”

It just so happens all of my classes are held in buildings around the quad so I walk through it everyday.

In the article “Powers of the Hoard”, Jane Bennet gives her own unique view on hoarders that many people may disagree with because she relates hoarders to environmentalists.

In The Ecological Thought, Timothy Morton offers a “prequel” to one of his previous works, Ecology Without Nature.  Timothy’s main argument is that the chief stumbling block to environmental thinking is the image of nature itself.